Monday, January 13, 2014

By the Waters of Kadesh by Carole Towriss

Kamose, once Egypt’s most trusted soldier, no longer has a country to serve or king to protect. Moses insists God has a plan for him, but Kamose is not so sure. Tirzah’s cruel husband died shortly after they left Egypt. She escaped his brutality, but now she’s alone, and once they reach their new land, how will she survive? Gaddiel, Tirzah’s brother-in-law, is chosen as one of the twelve spies sent to scout out Canaan. He’s supposed to go in, get information and come back, but all he really wants is to bring down Joshua.


Chapter One

8th day of Ziv, Spring
Wilderness of Zin
Tirzah slipped out of the tent, her bare feet sinking into the warm, coarse sand. She dragged the flaps down and tied them together to shut out the fading evening light, and tiptoed away. She cast a look at Gaddiel sitting on the other side of the campfire as she sank to the ground and reached for a cold manna cake from the stack on the plate. The sweet, honeyed taste filled her mouth as she bit into it.
She glanced past the rows of tents at the barren sand surrounding them as she chewed. Not a single sign of life broke through the gravelly sand; nothing could endure the blistering sun or evaporating winds of summer. Very little had survived the long, dry season of her life, either.
The setting summer sun cast long, twisted shadows of the flames onto her tent. The fire danced and skipped. When was the last time she had that much energy? She was tired … so tired. She could barely hold her head up to take another bite. How did she get to this point? Why did Yahweh let things get this bad?
She shoved the rest of the cake in her mouth. At least she liked the taste of manna, unlike most of those around her. One more and then a little goat’s milk. Maybe she could get some sleep tonight. She closed her eyes and let her head fall onto her raised knees, her long hair tumbling about her shoulders.
A plaintive cry broke the stillness.
Naomi. Tears pooled in Tirzah’s eyes. She delayed one more moment before putting her hand to the hot ground to push herself up.
Gaddiel glared at her, his dark eyes flashing from beneath bushy brows.
“I’m sorry. I’ll quiet her.”
Her brother-in-law rose and disappeared into his own tent, pitched next to hers.
She hustled into the tent. The child sat on her mat, eyes darting about, breathing raggedly, tears streaming down her face.
“Hush, habibti. Back to sleep.”
“I’m scared.” Naomi rubbed her fists into her eyes.
“I know. But it’s all right. I’m here now. Back to sleep.” Tirzah eased her back down and lay next to her. She pulled her close and rubbed circles on the little girl’s tummy to comfort her until the child, not fully awake, rolled over and drifted off.
Her twin sister lay fast asleep on the other side of her, undisturbed by the noise and movement.

But Tirzah stared at the green stripe around the tent’s roof for hours.

About the Author

Carole Towriss grew up in beautiful San Diego, California. Now she and her husband live just north of Washington, DC. In between making tacos and telling her four children to pick up their shoes for the third time, she reads, watches chick flicks, writes and waits for summertime to return to the beach.

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Carole Towriss is giving away a copy of By the Waters of Kadesh. To be entered in the giveaway, leave a comment along with your email address. You can enter the book giveaway twice—once on each Spotlight post for the author. Please note: The giveaway is for U.S. addresses only.


Anonymous said...

Enjoyed the review. This is a new author to me. Please put my name in for the give=away.
Maxie mac262(at)me(dot)com

Tea norman said...

Would like to win and read By The Waters of Kadesh by Carole Towriss.

Dana McNeely said...

I enjoyed Carole's first book, "In the Shadow of Sinai". I look forward to reading more about the characters I came to know so well.

Susan Johnson said...

I haven't heard of this author. Thank you for letting me know about her. I would love to read her book.

susanmsj at msn dot com

Jackie McNutt said...

The excerpt from By The Waters Of Kadesh looks very good. Thank you for featuring Carole.

Carole Towriss said...

Thank you all for dropping by! I'm so glad to meet you.

sm said...

Sounds like Biblical historical fiction. Love to win. sharon wileygreen1(at)yahoo(dot)com

Dana McNeely said...

Carole, you are a great writer, not only as a novelist, but also a humorist. I love your Facebook posts about the funny things your kids say. Your son makes me laugh, too - he reminds me of my youngest grandson, with the crazy things that come out of his mouth.

Boos Mum said...

This book sounds good. I already have the first, would enjoy winning this. Thanks.

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